The 10-Minute Message Makeover: Use This One-Page Template to Share Your Mission—Before You Lose Another Lead
You are exactly 10 minutes away from having a brand message that actually works. What if you’re not great at writing? Or don’t know what to say? I’ve tested this makeover 100+ times. It instantly helps people get what you do, and why they should care.
Included: a $500 bonus: a free copywriter hack to make your message irresistible.
Plus, this free makeover comes with my ‘You Basically Can’t Fail Guarantee.’
A field-tested, one-page template that forces clarity in 10 minutes.
No writing skills? No problem. Fill in the template and get an instant tip to turn it into a polished message you can share and workshop instantly.
An exclusive, behind-the-scenes workshop where you get the exact branding strategy I use with my paying clients.
Perfect for small businesses & nonprofits struggling to connect with their audience
Crafted for small teams (4-5 people) with no marketing expert
Ideal for founders (50-65+) who don’t have time to waste
Best for organizations with a bold vision but no clear way to communicate it
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Stop letting scattered marketing wreck your mission.
This is a messaging makeover—designed to make donors, customers, and supporters instantly get what you do and why it matters.
It’s the first thing I do with clients on a branding breakthrough session.
You are exactly 10 minutes away from having a brand message that actually works. Not “sort of better.” Not “mildly improved like a store-brand cereal.” I’m talking radical clarity—the kind that makes people instantly get what you do and why they should care.
(Alright, alright… for some of you, it’s gonna take 20 minutes because you don’t like being told what to do.)
If you don’t fix this? Well, then everything—your website, your emails, your fundraising—stays harder than a two-day-old bagel. So do future-you a favor. Set a timer. Get this done.
People who wait to do this NEVER fix their messaging. Don’t be that person. Set a 10-minute countdown now.
Clock’s ticking. ⏳
“Why would you give away a $1,200 session?”
Because this one session has been the most powerful branding tool I’ve ever used. It’s helped companies get unstuck, grow their audience, and get the clarity to take action.
Also, I can’t sit down and help everyone, because there’s only 24 hours in a day. So if this tool is helpful to you, ask me afterwards how we can work together!
“But for real: is this really free?”
Yes.
When I was starting out 10 years ago, I wish someone had handed me this worksheet. No fluff, no gimmicks—just the straight path to getting it right. So I’m not gatekeeping. I want to earn your trust. Maybe we’ll work together in the future. Here’s how it works:
- Watch the video
- Follow the prompts
- Enter your email so I send it all to your inbox.
That’s it. No sales pitch, no pressure.
I hope it helps!
“Is this actually useful, or is it just fluff?”
No fluff. This session fixes your brand’s core problems. If your website isn’t working, if people aren’t engaging, or if you don’t know what’s broken—this will show you exactly what to fix.
“I don’t have time to do this.”
It takes ten minutes at least, less than an hour at most. And you can do it at your own pace. You can also hand the worksheet to your team so they can implement it.
“I don’t need branding help.”
If your business is getting clicks, conversions, and engagement—then you probably don’t. But if your website isn’t working, your message feels unclear, or marketing feels like guesswork—this will help you.
“What’s the catch?”
There isn’t one. I genuinely want to help. Some people who go through this session might hire me later. Others won’t. Either way, I’m happy to provide value.
The “You Basically Can’t Fail” Guarantee
(Unless You Try to Fail, Which Would Be Impressive)
Look, I can’t guarantee you’ll get an award-winning marketing message on your first try—because I don’t control what you type, and I’m not inside your brain (yet). But here’s what I can guarantee:
- If you follow my ChatGPT prompt, it’ll nudge you toward way better results, for paying me nothing (Depending on how much you write, you might have to pay ChatGPT $20.)
- You can keep asking ChatGPT to tweak, refine, and adjust until it gives you something that makes you go, “Oh wow, did I actually write that?!”
- Some people will get chef’s kiss perfection instantly. Others might have to finesse it a bit.
- If ChatGPT is giving you the conversational equivalent of a sad trombone and you’re about to chuck your laptop out the window, don’t panic—I got you. We can hop on a call, and I will use my highly refined skills of message extraction (patent pending) to help you pull out what actually matters.
Basically, you will walk away with something that works, whether it’s a shiny new AI-amplified message or my expert-level, human-powered brand magic.
Need Extra Help? Just ask!
If you’re still stuck, second-guessing, or just want a pro to make sure you’re on the right track, you can grab 15 minutes of my time.
Send me your notes beforehand, we’ll meet one-on-one, and I’ll tell you exactly what to fix, sharpen, or double down on.
This isn’t a sales call. It’s not a pep talk. This is me, inside your brand, with a flashlight and a crowbar, uncovering the gold you’re sitting on.
Want even longer? We can up it to a 45-minute call. No prep, no effort. Just show up and I’ll do all the work.
And here’s the wild part—this one call together could be the difference between making $2000 versus pulling in $20,500+ in sales, donations, or new clients just because your message finally clicked.
If your brand message isn’t crystal clear, it’s costing you every single day.
Let’s fix it.
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